INSENSITIVITY

Saturday, June 05, 2010


There is always a room, 
One room we wanted to be filled in

But possibilities can't make it happen

When it it is fated to be always empty
Cold it feels when the clouds are around
But the furies covered over
Surely makes the feeling warm.
Sweat-like aura when it is hot
But the breeze that sweeps past
Dries every sweat-like fight
Worries fries up hope
Surely it brings you out home
Expelled it would be for peace
And surely follows out of sleep
Everywhere there are walls
Wherever it would be
Your eyes will be set to those closed doors
Definitely your eyes will be on those swirls
And those little ears would listen to every noise
Every days are full of rumors
Seconds of minutes: floods of anguish sorrows
Night and day, always filled with harbors
Even in lightness there are those thunders
Feelings of the disclaimer:
 Yes I don't care.
 Oh, yeah, it'll pass, its just for a day.
 Definitely, I'm happy.
He feels not, nothing, nonetheless, empty
For its is filled with treasures
It is a beautiful room, nothing to worry.
Every thunder, "Its just a breath away." he says.
Surely those swirls?
Jut step on it and its gone
He always speaks of, "It's finally done."
Easy as always
No worries and "Peace!" with a smile.
Insensitivity is it?
Don't feel like having hardships?
No bothers, no frets?
And yet as the writer ends it,
How I wish, my room, this desire,
That I dream to be a nice, elegant room
Won't stay as it is until now.

-Anonymous


As for me, this is what the poem is telling me:

The "room" stands for the personality of the writer speaking of it's desire to be insensitive. The "emptiness" stands for its absence of change. And the "rooms that were filled with treasures" stands for its changes described with its elegance to its essence. Here, descriptions to common problems are stated. And if you can observe, common scenarios and dilemmas were stated here in a form of exaggeration and metaphorical statements.

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