INSENSITIVITY
Saturday, June 05, 2010There is always a room,One room we wanted to be filled in
But possibilities can't make it happen
When it it is fated to be always emptyCold it feels when the clouds are aroundBut the furies covered overSurely makes the feeling warm.Sweat-like aura when it is hotBut the breeze that sweeps pastDries every sweat-like fightWorries fries up hopeSurely it brings you out homeExpelled it would be for peaceAnd surely follows out of sleepEverywhere there are wallsWherever it would beYour eyes will be set to those closed doorsDefinitely your eyes will be on those swirlsAnd those little ears would listen to every noiseEvery days are full of rumorsSeconds of minutes: floods of anguish sorrowsNight and day, always filled with harborsEven in lightness there are those thundersFeelings of the disclaimer:Yes I don't care.Oh, yeah, it'll pass, its just for a day.Definitely, I'm happy.He feels not, nothing, nonetheless, emptyFor its is filled with treasuresIt is a beautiful room, nothing to worry.Every thunder, "Its just a breath away." he says.Surely those swirls?Jut step on it and its goneHe always speaks of, "It's finally done."Easy as alwaysNo worries and "Peace!" with a smile.Insensitivity is it?Don't feel like having hardships?No bothers, no frets?And yet as the writer ends it,How I wish, my room, this desire,That I dream to be a nice, elegant roomWon't stay as it is until now.
-Anonymous
As for me, this is what the poem is telling me:
The "room" stands for the personality of the writer speaking of it's desire to be insensitive. The "emptiness" stands for its absence of change. And the "rooms that were filled with treasures" stands for its changes described with its elegance to its essence. Here, descriptions to common problems are stated. And if you can observe, common scenarios and dilemmas were stated here in a form of exaggeration and metaphorical statements.
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